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I dare you to fall.

    I will hold my breath for you,
    As you prepare to jump.

    I will reach for you,
    As you start to jump.

    I will carry you,
    Once you have landed in my arms.

I will do everything for you,
But only if you dare yourself to fall.
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She's scared to 'jump.' Trust me. I can hear the fear in her voice as we talk about the nothings of life...
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~HulioJules:iconHulioJules: May 15, 2008, 9:04:54 AM
:crying: :tears: ... "I dare you to jump" .... wow, :wow:, had this very feeling a while ago, too... but at some point I couldn't help it anymore, and I'll never lose the feeling I "nudged" her before she dared :(

Written so great this piece, short but deeply emotional nonetheless...

The intro, then the process described, like in slo-mo, and then the revealing end, very well crafted :D

Hope you can make her lose that fear, really :hug:

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It is the spectator, and not life, that art really mirrors! Oscar Wilde.